tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post756384866638262501..comments2023-08-08T05:34:07.577+01:00Comments on Summer: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post-86291431494015586152010-08-20T10:16:14.993+01:002010-08-20T10:16:14.993+01:00Thanks, Alan, Wahyu, and Spiros I agree about the...Thanks, Alan, Wahyu, and Spiros I agree about the comma, thanks!Beatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post-17075262807704875792010-08-20T04:26:29.778+01:002010-08-20T04:26:29.778+01:00..Beatrice..>>wishing you a
speedy recovery......Beatrice..>>wishing you a<br />speedy recovery..i like the <br />haiku too but feel that the<br />comma in L2 is too mild a<br />break; a semicolon or an<br />em dash would serve the poem<br />better, me thinks..>>spiros<br />---------------------Spiros Zafirishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545803839184857732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post-51070122440094947512010-08-19T03:50:20.194+01:002010-08-19T03:50:20.194+01:00Glad to know you are recovering, B. No reason to s...Glad to know you are recovering, B. No reason to stop writing nice pieces...Wahyu W. Basjirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04260428377205211034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post-40934387462150513142010-08-18T22:59:42.532+01:002010-08-18T22:59:42.532+01:00Yikes! I think you need to visit an onsen, are th...Yikes! I think you need to visit an onsen, are there any in England, or maybe a nice visit to a ryokan or two in Japan maybe? <br /><br />A delicious problem. ;-)Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post-21942894526944261002010-08-18T22:10:25.930+01:002010-08-18T22:10:25.930+01:00Thanks Vida:) Nothing so terrible, a fractured ank...Thanks Vida:) Nothing so terrible, a fractured ankle, but so terribly boring -six weeks in plaster!Beatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658771867517772120.post-7860449690879096382010-08-18T16:12:18.395+01:002010-08-18T16:12:18.395+01:00Love the “dancing breeze”! I wish you quick recov...Love the “dancing breeze”! I wish you quick recovery!Vidahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09445214590810247776noreply@blogger.com