On the hydrangeas
the weight of the morning sun
the evening sun
---Otsuyu
Nice! (was it an inchworm?)
A haiku-worm!
how delightful! :-)
i love the second and third lines very much.how aboutan earthworm measuresmy garage door slowlyan earthworm measuresmy garage door concertina - an earthworm measuresmy garage door hunched and stretchedan earthworm measuresmy garage door
It was more like 3 inches ... :)Thanks, Vida.
Haiku worm! -- You're right, Dennis. The first line could have been ...short long short ...Thanks.
Thanks, Kelly.
Thanks, David.I love the last two! :)
"Haiku worm" wins the prize for best comment! (By the way, a fun haiku.)
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Nice! (was it an inchworm?)
A haiku-worm!
how delightful! :-)
i love the second and third lines very much.
how about
an earthworm
measures
my garage door
slowly
an earthworm measures
my garage door
concertina -
an earthworm measures
my garage door
hunched and stretched
an earthworm measures
my garage door
It was more like 3 inches ... :)
Thanks, Vida.
Haiku worm! -- You're right, Dennis. The first line could have been ...
short long short ...
Thanks.
Thanks, Kelly.
Thanks, David.
I love the last two! :)
"Haiku worm" wins the prize for best comment! (By the way, a fun haiku.)
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