descending dusk
curled maple leaves unfold
mimosas close
can i have an editor's eye look at this for me?
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1 comment:
Hi Reihaisha
I'd suggest
dusk
maple leaves unfold
and mimosas close
both 'curled' and 'descending' are assumed by 'dusk' and 'unfold'
all the best
David
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