On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


.
first summer rains
a petal makes a typo
at a gravestone date
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5 comments:

diana l. said...

Very novel observation, Alan.

Diane Mayr said...

This is delightful! Completely unexpected!

Spiros Zafiris said...

..great poem, Alan..

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Nature's sense of humor .... Loved this.

Alan Summers said...

Thank you everyone.

It was a strange typo. At first the petal made the date look a few months ahead of the year, which was intriguing. ;-)

Alan
With Words
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