On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu



breathe in the night
that bottomless black reviver
of the new day

3 comments:

Spiros Zafiris said...

..very nice one, Diana..>>spiros
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diana l. said...

Thank you, Spiros.

David said...

there is something here. how about something like

breathe in the night
bottomless and black
before the day


I expect its just me but 'reviver' and 'new' break the spell

Best wishes

David