On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


short long short ...
an inchworm measures
my garage door

9 comments:

Vida said...

Nice! (was it an inchworm?)

Dennis Tomlinson said...

A haiku-worm!

Kelly Marszycki said...

how delightful! :-)

David said...

i love the second and third lines very much.

how about

an earthworm
measures
my garage door

slowly
an earthworm measures
my garage door

concertina -
an earthworm measures
my garage door

hunched and stretched
an earthworm measures
my garage door

Carlos Gesmundo said...

It was more like 3 inches ... :)

Thanks, Vida.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Haiku worm! -- You're right, Dennis. The first line could have been ...

short long short ...

Thanks.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thanks, Kelly.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thanks, David.

I love the last two! :)

diana l. said...

"Haiku worm" wins the prize for best comment! (By the way, a fun haiku.)