On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


surrendering
into the heat dissolving
no thoughts, no will

3 comments:

David said...

i like this Vida but i think it needs a little editing

how about

surrendering
to the heat -
dissolving thoughts


best wishes

David

Vida said...

Thank you, David! I like it :)

diana l. said...

Good teamwork there!