On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


I chase
the remnants
of my broken dream
chilling the night
of your absence

In Sixty sunflowers:
Tanka Society of America Members’
2007 Anthology

3 comments:

Kelly Marszycki said...

remnants of my broken dream -- stunning.

Reihaisha said...

Loved the last two lines

Vic Gendrano said...

Thank you Kelly and Reihaisha very much for your kind comments. Now, now, you ladies are making me blush...