On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


freeway drizzle
he helps his only daughter
move out

The Herons's Nest
Vol. XII, No. 3, September 2010

2 comments:

diana l. said...

:( Well captured.

Vic Gendrano said...

Thanks Diana. It was inspired by a poet friend's son whom she helped move out of their house one rainy day. I just reversed the characters' roles.