On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


morning dew
stretched across a field
my footprints

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

I wonder if you really need the pivot line?


morning dew
stretched across a field
my footprints

or

morning dew
stretched across a field
of my footprints

Either way, a really good haiku!

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all my best,

Alan

Spiros Zafiris said...

..this one's a pleasure to read;
quite excellent..>>spiros