On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


rain and clouds
looking for sky residue
in the hydrangea


4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I like it.

Maybe drop the "s"?

rain and clouds
looking for sky residue
in the hydrangea


or

rain and clouds--
looking for sky residue
in the hydrangea


all my best,

Alan

Vida said...

Thank you, Alan!
You are right, the "s" is out of place.

Beatrice V said...

fabulous!

diana l. said...

Ah, yes. Lovely.