On the hydrangeas
the weight of the morning sun
the evening sun
---Otsuyu
I like it.Maybe drop the "s"?rain and cloudslooking for sky residuein the hydrangeaorrain and clouds--looking for sky residuein the hydrangeaall my best,Alan
Thank you, Alan! You are right, the "s" is out of place.
fabulous!
Ah, yes. Lovely.
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I like it.
Maybe drop the "s"?
rain and clouds
looking for sky residue
in the hydrangea
or
rain and clouds--
looking for sky residue
in the hydrangea
all my best,
Alan
Thank you, Alan!
You are right, the "s" is out of place.
fabulous!
Ah, yes. Lovely.
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