On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu



summer heat
our bodies move electric
in a sunset glow

between dusk and moon set
a lightening strike
our bodies rise

2 comments:

David said...

you are trying to pack too much in here I think - how about

summer heat
our bodies move electric
in a sunset glow

between dusk and moon set
a lightening strike
our bodies rise


best wishes

David

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