On the hydrangeas
the weight of the morning sun
the evening sun
---Otsuyu
I like this one. The first 2 lines bring a sense of ease, while the last line is more unexpected. Also a good balance between silence and sound.
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I like this one. The first 2 lines bring a sense of ease, while the last line is more unexpected. Also a good balance between silence and sound.
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