On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


sunlight curves
follows the river --
drought carving a brittle edge

2 comments:

John McDonald said...

love it
john

diana l. said...

This is really nice.

Do you think you really need to use the progressive tense for "carving"? "Carves" seems like it would be so much simpler...