On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


weekend afternoon
lone fly buzzes
on ripening pepper

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

weekend afternoon
lone fly buzzes
on ripening pepper


Maybe an indefinite article?

weekend afternoon
a lone fly buzzes
on ripening pepper


all my best,

Alan
Area 17
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Reihaisha said...

Alan,

I like the first draft a lot. Thanks.