On the hydrangeas
the weight of the morning sun
the evening sun
---Otsuyu
I love this!all my best,AlanArea 17.
I like the "jump" from the grass- it makes the man's silhouette (that's how I see it:) hard to forget.
Well tied together.
The juxtaposition of "fatigues" and "panhandling" makes me think of the difficulty many have after coming home from war.
Thank you, all.
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I love this!
all my best,
Alan
Area 17
.
I like the "jump" from the grass- it makes the man's silhouette (that's how I see it:) hard to forget.
Well tied together.
The juxtaposition of "fatigues" and "panhandling" makes me think of the difficulty many have after coming home from war.
Thank you, all.
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