On the hydrangeas
the weight of the morning sun
the evening sun
---Otsuyu
Very intense images!
Melanie - your haiku got me thinking. I hope you don't mindhot dry river bedscorched Lomandra and Acacia -the indifferent earthBest wishesDavid
David I except any and all suggestions. Your words ring truer then mine, Much thanks.Melanie
Thank you Dennis for your comments. I am glad you liked it.Melanie
Melanie I've posted the revised haiku on my blog and sited you as co writer.I've also put a link to you haiku on the Four Seasons sight.Here is a link to it: www.conjuringsunlight.blogspot.comIf you are at all unhappy with the post just let me know and I'll remove it.Thanks and cheersDavid
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Very intense images!
Melanie - your haiku got me thinking. I hope you don't mind
hot dry river bed
scorched Lomandra and Acacia -
the indifferent earth
Best wishes
David
David I except any and all suggestions. Your words ring truer then mine, Much thanks.
Melanie
Thank you Dennis for your comments. I am glad you liked it.
Melanie
Melanie I've posted the revised haiku on my blog and sited you as co writer.
I've also put a link to you haiku on the Four Seasons sight.
Here is a link to it: www.conjuringsunlight.blogspot.com
If you are at all unhappy with the post just let me know and I'll remove it.
Thanks and cheers
David
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