On the hydrangeas

the weight of the morning sun

the evening sun


---Otsuyu


Dancing on my left foot
the breeze -the right foot envious
in its plaster cocoon

6 comments:

Vida said...

Love the “dancing breeze”! I wish you quick recovery!

Beatrice V said...

Thanks Vida:) Nothing so terrible, a fractured ankle, but so terribly boring -six weeks in plaster!

Alan Summers said...

Yikes! I think you need to visit an onsen, are there any in England, or maybe a nice visit to a ryokan or two in Japan maybe?

A delicious problem. ;-)

Wandering spirit said...

Glad to know you are recovering, B. No reason to stop writing nice pieces...

Spiros Zafiris said...

..Beatrice..>>wishing you a
speedy recovery..i like the
haiku too but feel that the
comma in L2 is too mild a
break; a semicolon or an
em dash would serve the poem
better, me thinks..>>spiros
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Beatrice V said...

Thanks, Alan, Wahyu, and Spiros I agree about the comma, thanks!